can you help me
feel a bit better
and much less bitter
about my bitumeny,
gravelly self?
can you make me feel that
i deserve to be
and at times, some more too?
send me a letter, all flowery
and sugary, false and coated,
quote and stagnate,
just make me feel
good, if only for a while…
am i asking for much too much?
am i not worth the trouble?
it’s just that i’m troubled
and muddied into a muddle.
mind me not,
but pay me some time,
a visit if you can and
make me revisit
all that could’ve been.
@andy: thank you
Bravo ! Well dine ! ” make me revisit all that I could have been “. What a word picture.
Very nice!
@Balchan:
thank you, very much. I too like the last line very much
@Neetika:
glad you think so 
@fivereflections:
happy to see the like 
@lesley carter:
happy to see the like 