The Message from Electra

White and black,

funereally stark,

set off not even

by the simplest raven

bracelet or other blinket,

i didn’t expect much

as my eyes traversed

the plain pale lines..

Was i in for a surprise?!

Jazz was just by the bay,

in a metallic tint

double-blue blare

that toppled the scales

and made me blink

at the screaming

message that peeped

out ever so timidly

off demure toes.

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7 Responses to The Message from Electra

  1. rashmenon says:

    @Yasmin Cruz, ineffablemrjones: 🙂 glad you like it 🙂

  2. rashmenon says:

    @ andy: 🙂 thank you 🙂 (was tempted to say electric blue-toed smile but decided against it :D)

  3. rashmenon says:

    @jsleigh14: thank you for stopping by and thank you for the like 🙂

  4. Neetika says:

    It doesn’t get older… it just gets better! Am i right? 🙂 😀

  5. rashmenon says:

    @ Guro Stuan: delighted to see the like 🙂

  6. rashmenon says:

    @monicaali: thank you for stopping by; glad to see the like 🙂

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