One in a Million

Elongated shadows


on bobbing green water,


on the cold green

Than on the pier.

The pair in darkness

Asked in frosty union-

What’s the probability

Of two hearts beating as one?

P.S: Linked to Trifecta Writing Challenge-

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12 Responses to One in a Million

  1. Cobbie's World says:

    Well, isn’t this just lovely. Very well done. You are a talented writer and have a wonderful way with words.

  2. Draug419 says:

    Ah, so pretty! ^__^ I love it!

  3. Aww, this made me feel good. I want to believe the probabilities are excellent. Beautiful writing.

  4. Lumdog says:

    The odds are astronomical that it won’t happen, so it’s a miracle when it does. Nicely done!

  5. Sandra says:

    Lovely! Absolutely possible when the two are in love. 🙂

  6. Trifecta says:

    Aww. That’s sweet. Nicely done!

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