A complex life

in

tent

ions

un-blanketed

felt

tensed

tipped

and released

intention actioned

aped and then

sh-aped

into paws(e)

and claws(e)

part moon

crescents

on impressionable elastic

skin

close spaces drawing

a savage re-lease

on life.

P.S: Linked to Trifecta Writing Challenge.Β this week’s challenge is to use the word ‘intention’ meaning ‘ intends to do or bring about’. Do read the entries at-Β http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/01/trifecta-week-fifty-nine.html

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16 Responses to A complex life

  1. Draug419 says:

    This poem is quite the animal lol I love the nature vibe within it (:

  2. atrm61 says:

    Definitely complex!loved the lines,”close spaces drawing

    a savage re-lease

    on life.”:-)

  3. on impressionable elastic skin.. that line stays with me. And savage re-lease. It’s a complex life that makes me think.

  4. jannatwrites says:

    I like what you did here. The opening – in, tent, ions – was very clever πŸ™‚

  5. Love this poem. Wishing I could hear it recited. hint hint : )

  6. joetwo says:

    This has a wonderful rhyming scheme!

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