split lips

con-

flat-

i-

on

you

heat

Ed, word

you end

i be

gin.

P.S: Written using a sliver of Jasmine’s Jetsam-

http://jasminecalyx.wordpress.com/2013/01/13/jasmines-jetsam-2/

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2 Responses to split lips

  1. jasmine calyx says:

    Holy cats. That is awesome! You put a whole new spin on the expression “split lips.” And it all begins with a con. Yikes.

    Con. Flat—I on you (or eye on you).
    Heat.
    Edward, [where] you end, I begin. (And also, when you end things, I turn to gin.)
    (Also, I see: Ed, can I have a word?)

    I really like that the ending might be happy or sad depending on your perspective. So glad you joined in! You really showed us that picking just a couple of words can work well too. No need to use all the words, or even half. Just the ones that speak.

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