Bed & Breakfast

Today she served
Up bitterness from 3 weeks back-
All tarred and thorny,
No salt, all irony!
I made no sound,
Gulped it all,
Kissed her ice-lips,
And sent her over the moon.


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19 Responses to Bed & Breakfast

  1. Draug419 says:

    Aged to perfection, neh? (: Great piece!

  2. deanabo says:

    This is really good!

  3. Ah that tarred and thorny bitterness! Terrific.

  4. Suzanne says:

    I love this! Very well written – and fantastic use of hyperbole!

  5. Lumdog says:

    That’s one way to make up! Nice job!

  6. Gina says:

    They made up! Hopefully. Three weeks is a long stretch of bitterness.

  7. Libby says:

    I LOVE this! Really well written!

  8. atrm61 says:

    Wonderfully exaggerated;-)

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