Half-lives (1961-1990)

They breathed in the asphalt,
The welcome whiffs
Of the wall caving in.
They let their children frolic,
Babe-limbs spin in the moment
Some of their fathers
Had laid down lives to create.

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10 Responses to Half-lives (1961-1990)

  1. barbara says:

    awesome image of the fathers laying down their lives in order for their babes to frolic.

  2. Draug419 says:

    I love the image of the spinning limbs (:

  3. deanabo says:

    This is terrific. I love how you chose to write the prompt.

  4. Lovely tribute, Rashmi.

  5. Christine says:

    Gorgeous! I would never have come up with this scenario, but it’s a fantastic perspective.

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