The First Raindrops

The earth flush,
Freshly wet,
No more a hothead
As the water flows
But a rain-portrait,
Suffused with a fleeting sense
Of self as can be.
I’m waiting too
For such a moment.

P. S – Linked to Trifecta

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12 Responses to The First Raindrops

  1. Suzanne says:

    I love the idea of being like the world after the rain comes. Beautifully written!

  2. So vivid and alive with hope. Very well written. One of my favorites.

  3. Draug419 says:

    I like this take on the prompt. It’s beautiful.

  4. Beautiful job on the prompt.

  5. KymmInBarcelona says:

    What a gorgeous piece. Love the rain portrait!

  6. Linda Vernon says:

    What beautiful thoughts these lines are! I love your poetry! πŸ˜€

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