An April Milan Morning

a wet Milan

clung to my over-sized coat

in dewy splotches

that shivered and fell,

brooked into clean green

water- still, then slow and quiet flow,

the shrubs on the bank shrugged,A Wet Milan

nonchalant in the presence of beauty.

 

Linking as a Real Toad to the Imaginary Garden for Kerry’s Challenge- The Prelude (http://withrealtoads.blogspot.in/2013/05/kerrys-wednesday-challenge-prelude.html)

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23 Responses to An April Milan Morning

  1. This is a gorgeous setting, filled with the peaceful atmosphere of such open spaces.

  2. Mama Zen says:

    This is just gorgeous writing!

  3. Beautiful, both your writing and the setting πŸ™‚

  4. Teresa says:

    Lovely setting!

  5. Grace says:

    I like the slow and quiet flow, a restful beauty ~

  6. Maggie Grace says:

    Ah, Milan. Your writing whisks me right back there. Beautiful and definitely wanting more of where you were led!

  7. Such a beautiful place…it speaks of peace

  8. This is beautiful! πŸ™‚ Love how you personified nature.

  9. Ella says:

    I wish I was there!
    Beautiful
    πŸ˜€

  10. I love how the entire city “clung” to you. That notion is captivating… unless the city is New York, in which case, the part that clings is soot!

    The image is beautiful. I want to visit someday… Thanks for a nice poem! Peace, Amy

  11. Hey, rashmeon! Trifecta here! We weren’t sure if you noticed, but you were one of our winners for the notebook/pen giveaway this past week! Please drop us a line at trifectawritingchallenge@gmail.com with your mailing address so that we can ship your prize out to you. Thank you!

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