Rebel says his lapel

but he says no to labels

and bubbles:

blood is but water-

colored and we are all air

and space, some with pace too

says he and runs, shouting-

but we’re of the same bloody blood;

now, file for libel!

P.S: Linked to Trifecta (http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/05/trifecta-week-seventy-six.html)

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16 Responses to Rebel says his lapel

  1. The Real Cie says:

    I really like the way this read. It was a lot of fun.

  2. Love the force and rhythm in this one!

  3. Draug419 says:

    What a fun read (:

  4. Delightful piece. It’s fun to read it aloud.

    Thanks for linking up!

  5. Lyssa Medana says:

    I loved reading this out loud, it has a lovely rhythm LM x

  6. jannatwrites says:

    I love the rhythm of this poem (and all your poetry, really :))

  7. Neetika says:

    FUN… From beginning to end πŸ™‚ i thoroughly enoyed it!

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