but he says no to labels
and bubbles:
blood is but water-
colored and we are all air
and space, some with pace too
says he and runs, shouting-
but we’re of the same bloody blood;
now, file for libel!
P.S: Linked to Trifecta (http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/05/trifecta-week-seventy-six.html)
I really like the way this read. It was a lot of fun.
π Thank you
Love the force and rhythm in this one!
π Thank you, Kymm
What a fun read (:
π Glad you think so
Delightful piece. It’s fun to read it aloud.
Thanks for linking up!
Thank you. Happy to link up π
I loved reading this out loud, it has a lovely rhythm LM x
Thank you, Lyssa
liberating and fun read.
π Glad you liked it
I love the rhythm of this poem (and all your poetry, really :))
π Thank you, Janna. Very happy to hear that π
FUN… From beginning to end π i thoroughly enoyed it!
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